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So alone in this ocean of repercussions
with that droning prosaic sound
wafting on the aroma of cigarettes
as B.B. King sings of his troubles;
now my troubles, I seek to hide away.

Submerging memories and beliefs
at the bottom of a half-drunken glass of bourbon
like a yellow submarine, seems easier in the lyrics,
pelting down on my eardrums like rain,
than that day time drama that unfolded before my eyes.

Though the river of harmony continues to ebb and wane,
the constant assault of anguish
continues to wrack my mind
as if fortified by this tumbler of spirits,
releasing more than it’s meant to suppress.

Growing wearier, whether the liquor finally functioning
or the tapping of my digits on the bar
demanding a torrent of negligence to drain my limited vigor
that the bartender refuses to give me;
the thoughts are all gone now, just in time for the next set.
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Author's Comments

This is based on the color blue and blues music. It is for my book "Romance of Colors" which you can find more information about in my journal. =Inked-Page

:aww: Enjoy :aww:

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:iconjazzman1989:
Thanks :) I love blues music and the first stanza came along so well. I was having problem finishing it off, but I think once I really got the idea I was looking for, it came out well.

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:
:iconiampoetry:
Smooth as butter. Keep putting words this way :)

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Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
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my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:iconcsnyder:
cool, me too, well its flows as one thought
welcome
:iconjazzman1989:
Thanks :) I like butter on my toast by the way :giggle::rose: I will try :)

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:
:iconjazzman1989:
Awesome :) So who is your favorite blues artist?

I'm really glad it flows as one thought considering I wrote the first stanza yesterday and this one today, almost a full 24 hours between :lol:

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:
:iconiampoetry:
I like butter and honey :)

--
Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
--
my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:iconjazzman1989:
Oh very nice. I love a lot of pre-war blues, which recordings are kind of hard to find and when you do find them, you really don't know who they are. I also really love the doors. They were the last band that to me really linked rock and roll to blues. The Black Keys are really good too :D

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:
:iconjazzman1989:
Oh, that sounds good. I used to have a friend that ate peanut butter and honey sandwiches. They tasted pretty good, but they got like extra sticky :lol:

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:

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