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Formulaic Poet by =Jazzman1989:iconJazzman1989:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Haiku & Eastern


Meter, mixed with rhyme,
Formal elements plus stress;
Poetry defined.
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A little haiku, simple as that.

:aww: Enjoy :aww:

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*Mahi-Fish Sep 6, 2009, 9:04:55 PM
I reject your definition and replace it with my own.

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=Jazzman1989 Sep 6, 2009, 9:08:05 PM
you just hate rhyme, meter, and structure :lol:

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=InMyDisk3yez Sep 6, 2009, 9:52:37 PM
ha! that's really cool, i dig it. i also don't care much for rhyme, meter, and structure, and would, in a small way, agree with mr. fish'z comment, but at the same time, i agree with your haiku, it's very creative. you might think that's odd, but hey. (although, i don't get hiz sig at all, do you?). you know, i have a haiku, if you're interested...? [link]

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george bush sayz we are lozing the war on drugz. you know what that impliez? there'z a war being fought, and people on drugz are winning it'. - bill hicks.
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*nid311 Sep 6, 2009, 10:52:36 PM
Very nice. My poems aren't usually structured, I admire those who can bring this sort of structure to their words.

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*Imkimmy4 Sep 7, 2009, 7:00:13 AM
so very true. :)
Well done big bro Wes! ^^

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~Swords-and-Bandages Sep 9, 2009, 9:22:24 PM
Clever.

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-Ed Alleyn, Shakespeare in Love
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~pooka-love Sep 14, 2009, 2:44:46 AM
I like!

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=nycterent Sep 15, 2009, 7:46:28 AM
I heart structure.
Rules are to be broken,
once mastered.
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*EatingMyOwnFears Sep 17, 2009, 5:03:39 AM
YAY FOR HAIKU LOVE!! :love:

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