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Dreams so subconscious,
surreal abstractions in mind,
lucid thoughts ramble (roaming).
:aww: Enjoy :aww: my dear friend :iconrockgem: helped me come up with the last line because I was stuck, but we could decide which word ended it better. I came up with ramble and she came up with roaming, but I don't know which one better. It is all a matter of perspective I guess :shrug: Let me know what you think :aww: I'm also doing this for a haiku contest [link]
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I personally like roaming. I feel like it's more airy, flighty. :shrug: