Curse is the ocean,
Colossal waves crashing
On my hopes
Of treading
the vastness,
Separating you
From my love.
Curse is the ocean, Colossal waves crashing On my hopes Of treading the vastness, Separating you From my love. |

Author's Comments
=rockgem was talking about her writing prompts that she has left, curse and fair, and I did a little short verse for curse right there on the spot.
Hers can be found here, entitled Curse the miles Comments
This is really sweet and simple. Nicely done, Wes.
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