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Drawn from NightQuiet nights on moonlit skies
Pass unnoticed by snoring tourists
Lightly treading on sullen paths,
While clouds pass like silken chocolate
Across the florescent vanilla wafer.

Tiny waning stars dot the voided sky
That seeks to escape the dreamy eyes
Of overindulgent minds seeking glamour,
Yet all I seek, caped in wandering comets,
Are the quiet nights you seek refuge
Inside opaque walls to slumber from,
And I am the one to live under cloaked life.
Does not include converterTwigs against glass send tendrils  
Like the brush of your fingertips
Across flesh; Grasping for time,
That will forever attempt to ensnare.

With that twinge of pain,
Electricity surges forth
Against the confines of the dam,
Holding back the extra hundred volts.

Is it so wrong that I lust
For that pinprick, that electrocution
Of elocution that does more than
Discharge the built up tension -

The building one hundred twenty volts
Snaking around dynamic fingers
Like a ghost serpent slithering
Up your central nervous system.

That unflappable chill lifting the hair on your neck
As if a spirit blowing concentrated streams
Of
RevenirTime passes in shadows
Cloaking air like
The infinite shade of space,
Which suctions the vessel dry,
A rapidly deflating balloon,
Yet in obscurity I stalk
The realm between existence
And being that swells
Like water dripping from
A rusted and ignored faucet.

How long till the puddle
Fiddles down the drain
In a succession of cacophonous
Ploppings that serve
To terminate a seemingly
Elapsed continuation,
Yet the thudding
And jarring of air hastening
Through silence
Is an ever-present memento.
SerfdomEvery day wanders,
Lost without purpose
Like a plastic bag
Drifting in the wind;
Meaning without logic.

Esoteric drifting,
Seemingly without
A sense of where
Or even when
To stop and prosper.

Lately, I too,
Drift without –
Meaning…
I long to be
A simple plastic

Bag. I too
Wish to sit
And let nature
Dictate my
Movements.

Too often, I am
Pulled, strung between
Two rigid poles
And hanged,
Drawn, and quartered.

Every time, I am I,
I am not I, but you;
Lately, my niche
Is not of my own,
It is yours and theirs.

Every day my mind
Fails to encourage
Creativity. Every day
I wander without
Purpose, l
Count the InfinitesimalEver try to count the stars,
The infinitesimal number
Of ornate star-burst specks
Populating the entrancing sky,
With multitudes of distinctive
Hues and intensities of light?

It's like that. It takes a lifetime
Of awe and admiration,
Of faith and determination
To trounce over the fact
That maybe I cannot count
To infinity or lose my place.

Should I count that shooting star
Or that comet, blurring the
Distinction between this star
And that? But I keep counting,
From that pale blue to the
Bright red to the intense yellow.

Each star its own distinct
Hue, flare, and intensity,
With its own distinct personality.
I've gro

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Please, I beg, come true

:iconjazzman1989:

Secret mystery
of my dreams,
you come to me
and are not seen.

You wake beside me,
but are not there,
the face and smile
on a wall so bare.

I wish to hold you
and never let go,
for you are mine forever,
I hope this time to keep it so.

I wait to sleep,
but die to dream,
so soon you’ll return
and come to me.

You will hold me close,
and keep me still,
so tomorrow morning
I am still there.

In your arms
forever to be,
is for now a dream,
but tomorrow a reality.
:iconjazzman1989:
I was talking to :iconrockgem: and she wrote "i hope my dreams become a reality and that i won't be dreaming forever of a smile and a face that haunts my sleep, that i want to hold in my arms and keep" so she came up with this idea for each of us to write a verse based on this. Here is mine.

:aww: Enjoy :aww:
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~animallover-13-95 Oct 7, 2010
Very beautiful.
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!welcome2chaos101 Dec 6, 2008   Photographer
lovely work!!! im running out of ways in telling you how good your work is but im gonna say this again cuz its so true...excellient job:nod:!!!
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*Jazzman1989 Dec 15, 2008  Student Writer
Thanks so much. Might have to put some effort in a new way to thank people myself lol
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!welcome2chaos101 Dec 15, 2008   Photographer
its okay:shrug:...ur welcum:)
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~Out-Of-Spite Dec 5, 2008
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very beautiful dear
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*Jazzman1989 Dec 15, 2008  Student Writer
Thanks :heart:
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!CSnyder Dec 5, 2008
very cool, i figured it was a dream from the first few lines and it was confirmed later, but this is great
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*Jazzman1989 Dec 15, 2008  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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!CSnyder Dec 15, 2008
youre welcome
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