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The Depression of Isolation by =Jazzman1989:iconJazzman1989:



Where did you go?
I long for you.
Ever second,
I pine for you.

Why did you leave?
I miss you so much.
Every second,
I think of you.

What did I do?
I want to hug you.
Every moment,
I want to kiss you.

How long will you be?
I wish you would come back.
Every moment,
I really hope you do.

When will you come back?
For it has been too long.
Maybe you won’t,
but every night,
I pray you do.
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Author's Comments

:aww: Enjoy :aww: I miss you :( :cling:

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:iconcsnyder:
pining for lost loves, hard not to do
but this is very nice, a sweet message my friend
:iconmustingel:
:hug: beautiful and sad.

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:blackrose: .:+† The Only One You Can Trust In The End Is Yourself And No One Else †+:. :blackrose:
:iconout-of-spite:
:(
very sad
I think you did a great job with the ending esspecially

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Believe the Lie: [link]
:iconkiwi-damnation:
Awww very good :D

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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
:iconjazzman1989:
Thank you :) :hug:

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:

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:iconmirrored-disgrace:
So sad :(
So personal, as well.
Be happy still, because you
turned out a great piece :P

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xxLee
:iconjazzman1989:
Thanks :p That is something worth a smile :D

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:

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:iconjazzman1989:
I had it in the style of the rest of the poem, but changed it when I typed it up because it sounded better. Sorry, I'm trying to think happy thoughts :(

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:

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:iconjazzman1989:
:hug: Thanks :)

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:

*Wonderful-World <--- Wonderful*World :dance:
*Inked-Page <---- Inked-page :dance:

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