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You Are the One by =Jazzman1989:iconJazzman1989:

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You are the one I trust the most, the one I love to toast. 

You are the one I must not hate, the one I love to date. 

You are the one I just can't get enough of, the one I love to see above.
You are the one I see dust to dawn, the one for whom I love to be a pawn. 

You are the one I who's heart I must never bust, the one I love with all my trust. 

You are the one I trust the most, the one I want to boast. 

You are the one I must never hurt, the one whose heart is tied to mine. 

You are the one I love the most, so let me end this silly toast. 

You are the one I will forever be with, so let me kiss you and it will beith.
©2008-2009 =Jazzman1989
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I can't stop writing about you :smooch:
For you I will never stop writing :iconlovehug:
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=CSnyder:iconCSnyder: Aug 29, 2008, 12:08:32 PM
its great to have someone to inspire
especially something as wonderful as this
=Jazzman1989:iconJazzman1989: Aug 29, 2008, 12:11:44 PM
Yes it is great to have someone, they complete that empty space that just wasn't right in your life.

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=CSnyder:iconCSnyder: Aug 29, 2008, 12:16:43 PM
indeed you are right
Mood: Love !leafpool248:iconleafpool248: Aug 30, 2008, 7:38:42 AM
this is so beautiful

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im banned
=Jazzman1989:iconJazzman1989: Aug 30, 2008, 7:46:53 AM
thank you :)

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:

*Wonderful-World <--- Wonderful*World :dance:
*Inked-Page <---- Inked-page :dance:
!leafpool248:iconleafpool248: Aug 30, 2008, 7:47:39 AM
welcomes

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=mode-de-vie:iconmode-de-vie: Sep 2, 2008, 6:50:55 AM
I think the last line sums it up perfectly. :thumbsup: Good work.

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=Jazzman1989:iconJazzman1989: Sep 2, 2008, 6:53:58 AM
Thank you :) I really like the use of the archaic form of be with the ith on the end :p I think it really adds some kind of old romanticism.

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~Take my hand and hold me close, Forever with you is my dose.~ :hug:

*Wonderful-World <--- Wonderful*World :dance:
*Inked-Page <---- Inked-page :dance:
=mode-de-vie:iconmode-de-vie: Sep 2, 2008, 7:02:57 AM
I think it does as well. It's an interesting use.

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