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Do you Remember?

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Do you remember that most intimate of times,
When all you did was cry because of the lies?

Do you remember those simple seconds
When all we did was hold hands and beckon
For all the love we could give and receive,
And remember everything that you can retrieve?

Do you remember those amazing moments
Where we came and left comments
About all the love and affection
That we have cared for without modifications
To this lifestyle we have come to share,
With all that love and adoration to show we care?

Do you remember those times
When we were who we are without all the rhymes?

I remember those specific moments
When we were in love and full of comments
About who we feel and fell in love
Especially all those magical times when we fit like a fit.

Oh those were the times,
The magical moments full of rhymes
Of how much I loved you and still do to this day,
So listen very closely to what I must say.

I love you so much that I cannot speak,
So much that you make me weak.
I love you so much that I will never lie
Because there is nothing cornier than saying I would die
To prove my love
Because what is there to prove
If you are no longer living,
You are no longer breathing,
You are no longer you.
I love to remember... that first sight,
that first smell,
that first thought or memory,
that first dance,
that first song,
that very first time you held my hand.
© 2008 - 2024 Jazzman1989
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mode-de-vie's avatar
The sentiment that you display in this poem is very adorable. I love the ending stanza, and of course, the bit in your artist's comments. It's all very sweet and touching. :hug: